Black Poetry : The Thought Of You!....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SOULSTAR, Jun 18, 2004.

  1. SOULSTAR

    SOULSTAR Active Member MEMBER

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    These feeling i feel are all so true it's just a shame you dont feel them too!...
    How i wish my dream would come true Living day and night just me and you.

    Kissing you is a lovely though Like being in Paradise on some classy resort

    Touching you would make my day Like being alone on some secluded bay!

    Engulf me with your smile Like a ride down the river Nile

    Your intelligence is so sublime Like a sip of the best french wine

    Your mind is so refined ....Your on mine all the time!!!........

    Heres a poem i wrote just for YOU!!........The thought of you thats what gets me through!!....
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The thought of you is such a wonderful way to pass the day, I like this a lot and it made me think too. thanks for sharing this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done
    i like
     
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    Such sweet thoughts of a love, yes, they do help ya get through the day....very nice.
     
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