Quiet Poetry Lounge : the third time is a charm...(for Jules)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Sep 22, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please be happy this time
    I remember a very lonely
    man losing himself
    in the fast night life

    (in between first and second wife)

    and I remember your live-in lovers
    and all your undercovers
    I even directed a few love scenes
    at one time or another

    ooh, but I can say this for true
    I know how important a home
    with one woman is to you...
    don't want no more whoring...
    and the clubbing got boring...

    all the games played by
    every single/married lady
    so many tricks,
    everybody so **** shady

    wore on your soul... and your tender heart, too

    but you never lost hope
    wouldn't say die
    & now you have a different point of view

    May God be in this with you...


    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Jules

    Jules New Member MEMBER

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    Wow! I cannot believe you did this, really alize! Thank you so much for this and all the things you've done over the many years. Thank you for tolerating this sometimes cry baby foolish man.

    Your friendship is a true gift from above, m'lady. And I am believing and trusting in God, the Maker of all the charms we can ever hold. I know this is the one for me!

    Jules
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce-Really warm and wonderful piece, just like you. I am praying for you too, Jules. You both deserve the BEST!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a friend of alyce is a dear friend of mines and may dis blessing
    continue 4 u Jules
    Alyce u have open da flood gates once again & made the river
    run freely wit joy gurl u just keep amazing me
    this was so sweet and beautifully written
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAUTIFUL IT TIS.... I FEEL THE DEPTH OF THIS PIECE AND I KNOW IT WAS STRAIGHT FROM YOUR HEART .....
     
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