Black Poetry : The Thing that Steals Ya Flow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alrighty then Rich, this piece is sort of weird, but here we go....
    The Thing that Steals Ya Flow....

    As it entered the Destee's
    poetry forum on the front page,
    this thing, inhaled smoke
    and exhaled pure rage.
    For it is a great pretender
    without nary a flow.
    Now, shhhh, tell me
    where in the he!! did it go
    And if that's not scary, then
    baby I don't know,
    cause just the thought
    of it, scares the **** out of me, so....
    Look the hell out, run
    get in the house, lock your door
    This thing is welding an ice pick,
    a drill, and a paper, to give ya what for
    Dag nabbit, see, there's always one!
    Poet you didn't let that doorknob hit ya,
    Now the thing is gonna run up
    beside you, and split ya
    Hard head, soft behind, didn't
    I say it was going to git ya?
    As us other poets, peer out their
    windows, sorry, but glad it's not them,
    the thing slams granite head
    down to the floor, oooh look at him!!!!
    Homey don't play dat, that thing's been
    pumping iron at the gym.
    Thing drills the left side
    of the poet's brain
    Frontal lobe bits flying, the sound
    alone, driving onlookers insane
    Ice pick chips away at the grey
    matter, now the blood oozes
    flowing out onto the paper, there
    go the metaphors, word play, and muses
    Hey, I want to help the poor soul,
    but my own common sense refuses
    I think he's finally dead, as the last drop
    of poetic verse drips onto paper
    The thing dun stole his flow,
    and so ends this horrific caper.
    Beware of those who merely lurk
    at Destee's, for they may possibly be
    the thing that steals flows...
    I hope to God, it doesn't catch me....
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    goodness goodness
    i ain't ready for this*laughing*
    got them scarey things
    STEALING FLOWS
    now you know i'm scare..:)
    how will i make it through all of this,,,*laughing*
    tight one sis...
    DAG:)

    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes tricky things happening dis week
    so don't sleep it's da fear in da air
    scary indeed .......................yes !

    Da fright nights continues
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know Blue, I couldn't rise to the occasion enough to be totally scary, so I just let that humour in also, just a tad. Thanks sis.
    I guess we all better sleep with that third eye open Rich. This was fun, poet. Thank you for the whole scenario.
     
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    cuh-razy!!!!!! :jumping: Way to whip out the creativity, girl. No matter what or how you write, it's always bangin. :terrific:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A bit loony toony I know, but it was fun gempis. Thank you for the praise. Now, where's your piece poet? Looking forward to it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Booooooooooooo!
    da flow of spooks stealing thangz
    boo !!!
     
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    Girl...this was so clever
    and genius...

    *APPLAUSE* and *Drumrolllllllll* :drums:

    ...now the "thing" that steals flow...
    that's a true all Hollows Eve creature


    Closing the shutters reaaaaaaaaal tight... :weird:
    Sage
     
  9. caramelpython

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    :court: If I find it i will get it 4 u sis...LOL :court:

    :laugh:

    Nice drop and nice creativity.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very creativity and i enjoyed this read
    Peace
    Angel
     
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