Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Thief

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Roxanne, Oct 13, 2001.

  1. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He tried to disappear
    But I could hear him
    Creepin' in
    Again
    Whispering lies
    Me listening
    Like it be truth told
    Stole too much of my love
    Only wanted the kind
    I stored between my legs
    Prayed many times
    He cum Black
    To steal some more
    Once is just a blunt high
    A knight can never be called
    Or caught in love
    Sigh, I and lug my memories
    Heavy burden
    Pain becomes anesthetic
    Never reconciled in the heart
    Injected by what I think
    I need him here
    But a player can only play his part
    He a thief
    He takes
    My loving
    A precious jewel
    His perfect crime
    A treasured heart
    I give
    He escapes
    Makes me a fool
    Pardon his intent
    Keeps him
    From doing time
    Needing something
    Is different than wanting someone
    Desire will make you
    Tell yourself a lie
    The truth
    A thief is like a cool breeze
    Leaves you with nothing
    But a cold to lay beside
     
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    oh my Lawd!

    I'm still picking myself up off the flo.....

    chilly down to the marrow, Roxanne!


    "...He escapes
    Makes me a fool
    Pardon his intent
    Keeps him
    From doing time
    Needing something
    Is different than wanting someone
    Desire will make you
    Tell yourself a lie
    The truth
    A thief is like a cool breeze
    Leaves you with nothing
    But a cold to lay beside"



    the troof, anyhow..

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' my

    a love snatcher
    a heart keeper
    a man of lies
    a thief in da night
    that aint right
    set his sight on ya
    honey jewel treasure
    by all measures
    and creep out da door
    til he lone for more
    what a shame
    but who's da blame
    inthis wacked game
    coz u be needing him to come back and steal again !

    sweetie ya gotta face it his gone so let him stay
    even if yo heart say no !
    wow!! this piece had my eyez wide open and mouth hung!
     
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    bringing back this thief song !
     
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    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Caught Em

    Again a thief in my life, so i had to read this one to remember the outcome...
     
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    And like time before you know what to do from here as i revisit the stage
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Roxanne
    Wow Roxanne
    WOW!
    I will try to stop saying that, and in the meantime I just would like to say how powerful this was
    NOTHING MORE than a Thief
    The worst kind
    Some thieves take more then materials, even then of the flesh. Those my sister, are the worst kinds.
    Wow. I pray the Hero comes to save(and ask him to tell his friends that there are some other ladies, needing some healers, givers, hearted kings, some other things, and a savior) We will better this YET!
    PEACE:10200:
     
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    "Desire will make you tell yourself a lie"...wow, isn't that the truth. We all want that love, that caring, and when we hear the lies we want them so much to be the truth. And sometimes those lies are presented with precision. You've learned from your mistake, good for you for knowing to apply what you've learned now. Potent piece.
     
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