Black Poetry : The Temptress

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  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~As I
    allure your mind
    with love's expression
    bid you suggestive visuals
    surreal and ideal
    enchant your nature
    tempt to surge
    ....emotions
    to exquisite dimensions
    seek to entice
    so nicely
    leaving you freshen
    from cupid's kiss
    feeling slowly>>take hold
    come...
    allow me favor
    to relax and seduce>>u
    into passion's orbit
    probe the depths
    of inhibitions
    spiriting>>> u to
    ...........A
    ~ascending
    I~R~R~E~S~I~S~T~I~B~L~E
    hunger of
    *imagery
    *intensity
    *stimulation
    come escape with>> me

    ~The Temptress



    Epiphany(c)2001
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epiphany

    :) Can I just smile & do a 're-read' .... this is lovely & I'm takin' in all the visuals sistah friend!!


    Wonderful!

    N2
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, yeah, e...this piece is very tyght. i'm like n2, i gotta go back and do a re-read, too. i'm lovin' it. quite nyce.
     
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    i fell...

    a willing yet tragic victim
    of love's allure
    attracted by expressions of
    TAKE ME THERE
    {wherever there might be}
    i came to see if you would go with me
    temptress
    seductress
    devourer of lonely hearts
    take me to the mountain top
    and push me over
    the hump
    that bars my way from
    happiness
    feed the hunger of my
    intensely stimulated imagination
    that lends to these insatiable
    cravings
    of.....

    hmmmm.:)

    NICE FLOW.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    temp me temp me!

    wow taketh me in coz i'm coming wit ya
    take me their..........:D
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epiphany~

    Swing by and pick a brutha up...lol I need to get away! lol

    This hea was definitely tempting ma! Keep bringin the heat!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    E-PiP.


    ...do yo thang sistah-friend!! :)

    this is pure... undiluted lov-li-ness!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahh Yes!

    Attracted by your style
    makes the poetic vibe
    go wild.
    Tempted poeticly
    silently...
    Thanks for sharing this piece poet.
    Tyte!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister dear,

    How nice. I likes. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :love:
     
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    epiphany;
    This was a very temping peice. You make a person want to escape. Keep the flow coming.
    :toast:
    :cool:
     
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