Black Poetry : The Temptress

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    By a mere thought
    she invites her young victim to her lair.
    Like a ravenous carnivore
    she’s continually hungered.
    Her lair dimly lit by red and blue lights.
    The walls covered in black.
    Satin lining hang from rafters veil her path.
    A carpet stitched from the coats of many bears caress my feet
    as I walk towards her.
    She is posed as Venus a goddess of great beauty.
    She wears silk nocturnal garb, which seems
    to have been knife-stricken
    slashed in ways appealing to a voyeur.
    As I approach her I hear echoes
    of the tortured souls before me.
    Oh how loud the moans grow.
    I hear also cries saying “LOVELESS LUST IS AN EMPTY PAIN”.
    And although I hear and understand
    I can’t help but continue onward.
    Entering her presence I am pranced upon,
    like a lioness to her prey.
    She rips my garments
    till they resemble nothing more than the ancient
    clothing of cavedwellers.
    She has me pinned to the surface of her bed.
    Me looking as the next fattened pig
    to be slaughtered and devoured.
    She as a famished beast hunting her next meal.
    A top me she lies.
    Shoulder drapping hair above my face lowers
    acting as a cage.
    Because I can bear no more torture
    she allows me to act as a weaning child.
    Unbeknownst to me this being the final clinch to her trap.
    She presses against me
    all the while squeezing and draining the fluids of my soul.
    Till finally the essence of life is stolen from me
    leaving me lifeless
    as are the stains on her mattress
    from previous encounters.
    No more I am the man I was
    Drowning in the epitome of silence
    I the victim of the temptress

    Nah’shon - Rae 12/92
     
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    I hope you like this older piece
     
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    I am surprised no one really read this one...
     
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    old or new this was deep the depth and layout was divine brutha
    i love the vibe of this pt.2 please wow!!!!!
    flow on poet
     
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    I am glad tha I did read it it is an awsome piece, I felt like I could actually see her and that is what poetry is supposed to do.
    hot
     
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    tyte piece...well written...
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i' also am glad you brought this back for us to see..
    loved it...love the images...heard the music playing as she preyed ..tempting...
    tantalizing flow...
     
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