Black Poetry : The Temptress

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THE TEMPTRESS
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    Alabaster, no longer sought her affecton.
    Beauty and grace adorned her nonetheless.
    More determined than ever, a brother needed to
    resist her charms, if by sheer will alone.
    There had been too many insults and far too much pain.
    Driven nearly mad by his irrational fixation,
    the man knew that he was whipped... such a man,
    is out of control. The Temptress, was one fantastic dream
    gone awry. She affected him in real time,
    messing with his head at every turn.
    Poor man didn't know whether he was coming or going.
    Who else, but The Temptress, could make his spirit dance,
    flip it; and suddenly have his whole world come apart?
    Then, at her whimsy, inflate or deflate his ego.
    In the end, truth would set him free; delusion begone!
    However ironic, Alabaster loved her.
    Regardless, The Temptress, had to go!


    1poetsought ~ coppyright 2003 :heart:
     
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    Very nice...very tempting
     
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    Thanks, Cindy!
     
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    NDeep, Nice to have you drop by also!
     
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    This was so real and on time...

    Good thing you are a wise soul...lest things could get out of control and nothing but nothing is worth losing your soul....

    Blessings On Ya House!

    P.S Thanks for posting my messages when I couldn't sit up long enough to do it myself...smooches:kiss: :kiss:
     
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    This reminded me of Satan in the garden of Eden.
    Whew! heavy stuff! Thank God that even
    Satan has to answer to God...
    Nice to read your work again 1Poet!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    msluciousb

    Good to feel your presence again. Thanks!
     
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    Thanks, it's always nice to see that graceful black cat running down one of my dreams. God Bless!
     
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    nice poet. The temptress comes in many forms. I'll keep a look out for ya. tyte scribe
     
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    GOOD LOOKIN' OUT

    Purple, Thanks!
     
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