Black Poetry : the teen state of mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Froggy1, Jul 25, 2005.

  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being a teen
    you feel invincible
    like your life is something so untouchable
    feeling you and your friends are indispensable
    having no troubles feeling so sublime
    but everybodys gotta grow up sometime
    even you too man
    dont ditch school to go play hooky
    while im taking a bit out of that knowledge cookie
    dont procrastinate
    cause soon youll need money for your family to create
    but fine go ahead
    keep screwing around and end up dead
    thats the feeling youll get
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PRETTY COOL SCRIBE POET,STAY UP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we get lost on the path
    yet wet twist will make one slide
    the mind go for broke this no joke
    as it stroke way back to reality ...

    I been there as a teen and learn the hard way
    tyte drop to the heads of teens
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many teenagers do feel invicible because life hasn't taught them how fragile we actually are...yet. I hear what you're saying here, and I liked how you said it.
     
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    i am really feelin this, nice work

    peace
     
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