Quiet Poetry Lounge : The tears of a clown..........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Jan 10, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The tears of a clown i so understand
    especially when the tears fall for an unbelieving man

    When all else fails
    you run, you hide even bail (out)

    on our life and dreams
    the world can be rough and mean

    its sad to see the sadness upon the clown's face
    hoping the sunshine will come through and erase

    the pain it feels inside
    for good fortune for us to ryde

    out without a care in the world
    but i hold on pressing on being your baby gurl

    through out it all i stood by and held you down
    still when lightning strikes you runaway with a frown

    no matter who see us as being wrong in our eyes were right
    it doesnt mean for you to take flight

    for you to see down the lonely road
    that all that glitters aint gold

    and you will realize that it was i the clown who held you at heart
    why does it have to end lets start

    over and let what people say roll off like a water to a duck
    what ever happen to the man who says "what the F**k

    you use to give a [email protected]
    now i am

    shedding

    The tears of a clown!!!!!!!!!!1
    :bawling: :bawling: :bawling:
     
  2. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yes yes

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    My gurl nevar, I see you doing it..
    Much love to one gifted poet... Flow on sis
     
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    great scribe poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Ms. Patrice thanks for the love and support.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!!
    this was tyte u laying it down my dear......flow head sis.
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to soblessed....

    :kiss1: thanks for the love shown makes a girl feel real good!!!!!!!!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep vibe poet
    Nice delivery sister
    Much Love Nevar
    Love ya sweety
     
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    real deep nevar, i see you taking to another level keep doing the thing waiting to hear more.
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to blacksoul....

    thanks for the love that shown everytime you read me. you so sweet!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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