Black Poetry : The Tear....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in a tear..
    the hurt and pain..
    the burning inside..
    as she yearns
    for the love of another..
    her silent screams
    cant be heard
    for she keeps them
    inside….where it
    seems to be safe…
    but it cuts her down..
    wanting but cant
    reach…she knows
    she’s doom…travelin alone
    empty but….
    heart so alive and full of love..
    but no one seems to see….
    The silent scream…. invisible
    To the world alone
    Fightin her pain…
    All in a tear she
    holds inside..
    her hurt and pain..
    burning inside…
    for love stop living
    until she sheds
    that one tear
    of pain........
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow.

    So nice, so painful.

    You did it again.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]....u read my mind on this one...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well captured tyte scribe
     
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    Very powerful, mzblkangel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this read so touching from the top to the bottom nice drop sis
    Peace
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz fam fo da love..means alot...
    much love to you all..:angel1:
     
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