Black Poetry : The Taste After...Aftertaste

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  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    The Taste After Aftertaste


    chocolate Coltrane
    eyes
    peppermint soul
    woman
    be…
    millions of moon flowers away
    still
    her latitudes dance
    within supple miles
    espresso stirs and
    dalai lama reads
    missing
    the…
    walnut touches
    those…
    amethyst stares
    them…
    copper-toned angels
    these…
    sixty-nine temperatures
    that…
    pecan summer
    bottom
    lip
    oils seductively
    quench…ing
    Liberian nights of
    burning myrrh memories
    I swallow often
    leaving
    an…


    Jahvandus Kwu
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One word for you today J~

    WWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwOOOOOOOOOOOOOOwwwwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWWWW!


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  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soooooooooo ummmmmmmmmm delicious. Sounds like you missin someone. Cool flow I like the peppermint soul woman part. Keeps ya mind open huh.





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  4. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shakin'...

    ...my head in agreement with UbSoRbShUn. Simply, delicious...
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok I went lookin for this here

    just so I could read this passage again

    "Liberian nights of
    burning myrrh memories
    I swallow often
    leaving
    an…"

    Leaving an Aftertaste, I get it now well done

    *The light has come on*


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  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Niiiiiice very nice...

    very elegant and it flowed a like a quiet river running into a lake...nice...very nice.
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man.....

    u just amaze me everytime.....

    ev-er-ree-time!!
     
  8. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    One Love!!!!!!!

    It's nice to know that the aftertaste is not only shared by myself

    jah
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAH....

    oooooweeee!!... how the hell did i get caught slippin
    on dis one hea!?!?... i had to put myself in check
    after reading it.

    this piece is abSoulutely... divine!! ****! :)

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DIZZZZAMMMMM!! SAY IT POET!!
     
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