Black Poetry : The Tamed

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  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have a desire that is gone forever.
    The desire to be loved in the very heart of my womanhood.
    It's gone but not forgotten, because the mind is a very powerful thing.

    Oh yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
    Right thereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    I'm about to...........................

    It's gone never to be kissed again.
    To be adored by the man who loves her.
    I'm not angry, just sad to see it leave.
    But true love is stronger than desire.

    Desire last 30 minutes on a good day.
    But true love is forever.
    So I choose love.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes!!! Choose to love Sister, this was the greatest love story ever told.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, true love is stronger than desire. There was a quiet power behind this. Flow on.
     
  4. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks u guys I appreciate your comments.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhh...who doesn't choose love?
    and to be loved?
    this is the truth and u brought it,sista!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love on dis was power and depth in motion
     
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