Black Poetry : The Tambourine

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    New in this Life
    Still old in my mind
    I am working in times
    That are really really.........

    Good Good
    Bad Bad
    Struggle Struggle
    I pray the bad does not last

    Teachings of a Power
    Blessings Through the Divine
    Shine Shine
    Emmbrace your Time

    Live Knowledge Like a mime
    Don't Speak
    Just know the Lines
    Live on High

    Love all
    Be like the Greater
    Continue the Massess
    Accept No Failure

    Give the Gift
    Of which you receive
    Bring forth tride
    Gleam

    Requisitions of a failure
    Passing Like the the Dove
    Ugly Ducking Floats
    Like others but with both

    Tassles
    Lassoes
    Castles
    All through time capsules

    Create Sprits trinity
    Mechanise Transparently
    Conspire traquility
    Adminitser Ability

    Beings of a Majesty
    Love empowers Massively
    Hands graspingly
    Hold of The Tamborine
     
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    Wow Ms Plat. You got some mad skills...I wanna be like you when I grow up...LOL!!!
     
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    In reading this, I envisioned a spiritual uplifting of souls. Creatively posed poetess.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :haha: smh
    Sis Hope You are a Silly Lady......smh
    Thank You Very Much Queen

    Sis Watz........
    You are making me feel good!!!!!!!
    LOL........My Words are taking you places that take me with you just because they are taking YOU there!!!!!
    Thank You Queen
    :)
    Bless Ladies
     
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    I felt nothing but goodness and blessing from this ....
     
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    Hi Sister PLATINUMILLITY1
    Your poem do have a beat, like a song.
    New in this life
    Still old in the mind
    So true no matter what age we are born in
    The old ways have a lot of good points
    that help US in the present

    Peace and Love
     
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    Yall are Blessing Me with Your Presence ......so sincere
    I thank you for your Love.............
    ~Peace Love and Blessings~
     
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