Black Poetry : The Sweetest Poetry

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night, I met you in a dream
    and it was oh-so-good to see you again
    longing to
    saturate my cares in the fabric of your voice
    girl, you soothe me more than my pen
    see when I’m scribin’ and unwindin’
    there’s still some reminding
    that things can and do go wrong
    but when I’m lost in your eyes
    or resting my head on both thighs
    my world has a much more euphonic song
    it’s music to my ears
    you, subsiding my fears
    the ways you present yourself, wholly, to me
    bringing me close to tears
    you’re like the most powerful line
    in the perfect poem
    where all else is forced to stop
    take you in
    breath your substance
    exhale your message
    value the beauty that you represent
    coming to the complete realization
    that you
    embody
    my heart’s content
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathtaking peace.


    Coco :heart:
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this is warm honey!
    oooh i love this poem...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies,

    thanks for the read....I appreciate it....and both of you should know that I'm feeling everything you write just as much.


    :D thanks

    MJ
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was honest, pure, and soul stirring .... the way u are able to tell .... it's rare in a man may your creator continue to bless u to do so and may he be the fullness thereof and the covering of this joy she brings you.... because joy it is indeed , yes joy tis is, pure joy ..... i am feeling you
     
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    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    absolutely stunning!i love this.You have a golden pen, Tarheel, coupled with an beautiful and expressive mind. Dont trade them for Nothing.
     
  7. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for those expressive words of appreciation....they mean so much....especially coming from two whose work I enjoy so much....I appreciate it

    much love

    MJ
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWESOME!

    :)

    alyce
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply, just a beautiful love-piece!


    ~~~chaptasoflove~~~
     
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    your words make love sound like the ultimate comfort zone..the only place to be....

    I like the way you express yourself....

    K
     
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