Black Poetry : The Sweetest of All Days

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  1. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    The Sweetest of All Days

    The sweetest of all days was actually three,
    The first two of which you never noticed me.
    It wasn’t until the third day that you asked for my name.
    You playfully flirted with me and I did the same.
    On the sweetest of all days I fell for your charms,
    Numbering thirteen, one for each night I spent in your arms.
    The entire night we laid with you holding me,
    I knew then that there was no other place that I would rather be.
    The sweetest of all days took me by surprise,
    The kisses weren’t the only thing to have butterflies.
    So soft, so sweet, you kissed my cheek.
    My knees went weak and my heart skipped a beat.
    On the sweetest of all days I fell so hard for you,
    You looked deep into my eyes and said you had fallen too.
    But on that same night you ruined all that we could have had.
    Who knew that someone that could make me so happy could also hurt me so bad.
    The sweetest of all days turned out to be nothing more than a lie.
    It was just a memory that I can’t get rid of no matter how hard I try.
    Someone I thought really cared hurt me in so many ways,
    But still I can’t help but wish you the sweetest of all days.
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So soft, so sweet, you kissed my cheek.
    My knees went weak and my heart skipped a beat.
    ...I :heart: this part
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shoot, my knees went weak just reading the powerful emotion you put into this:)
     
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    So soft, so sweet, you kissed my cheek.
    My knees went weak and my heart skipped a beat.

    i like this line..wooooweeee...nice poet
     
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    very sweet scribe u hittin on all gems
    flow head on
     
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