Black Poetry : The Sweet Smell Of Liberty

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Sweet Smell Of Liberty


    Oh the sweet smell of liberty, the indoctrination of a free mind, I have just seen a beautiful thing, the off spring of justice, has taken the blinders of her eyes, oh but yet the tears of her eyes that cried blood, conscious of the hidden lies, oh but when the bells ring from above, liberty began to cry a sour tear, I have been blind in the solid tomb, I cry the tears, a planted doom, and the freedom bells ring from the rainbow of the skies,

    Until that wind that blew it away, the birth of a powerful thing,
    Against a gold, gold sky, the rainbow of de’ almighty cried out loud, Oh you big tormented stone, that lye upon the skies I sow, forever shall my words be spoke, without righteousness freedom shall be no more.
    A straight line that I walk, upon the glorious warriors
    Of righteous soul, exquisite in a soft tone, that steals from my children’s
    Sanctuary of calm, sensitivity of the proclamation of psalms,

    A black pearl that rise upon the clouds, the virgin stone that creates life,
    Oh the spirit has risen upon the sea,
    The cries of the warriors, who wear the blood of my son,
    Look upward upon the skies, upward the skies of free.
    Oh beautiful shallot of form, the black pearl that creates life,
    Upon the indigenous fight, the pearl that shines upon the night,
    The pearl of my chosen night, the soul that eats from the pearl of life, oh the righteous virtues of my native life, liberty the black ebony pearl, the liberty of my house, Psalm off the gracious sky.
    Noumi Collectives @2005
     
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    now this was heavenly sprayed
    in black pearls of essence sis..

    I enjoyed this a lot
     
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    Ashanta, I didn't know the sweet smell of liberty until you put it into words....Blessing Sista, Blessings....
     
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    Quote-A straight line that I walk, upon the glorious warriors
    Of righteous soul, exquisite in a soft tone

    Reply-I just love your flow
    You are a wonderful poet
    Thank you Sista
     
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    a masterpiece of poetic expression

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blessings and thank you
     
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    no thank you for given us the vision inside your gift
    what a true blessing you are sis .....much love upon you .
     
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    Beautiful to the second power. This was a wonderful extension for the minds absorbing it to connect with your creativity. Keep scribin'.
     
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    ashanta anotha fine write i always enjoyed reading ya. thanks for sharing your gift of the pen. from Nevar!!!!!!!!1:star: :nuts:
     
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