Black Poetry : THE SWEET POEM

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsGhettoPoet, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :love:
    Im so sweet I'll make u diabetic
    I know u'll feel me if only u let it
    Flow like water workin thru a well
    When u see me, ur heart starts to swell
    Your veins start to jump
    Your brain starts to pump
    In ur throat theres a lump
    But theres no need to front
    Lemme bring u to my world
    Where every thug has a girl
    That they treat like a pearl
    Well I can be ur gem
    Your diamond within
    Your precious piece of gold
    A treasure for u to hold
    Or better yet to keep
    I want u for me
    To love eternally
    So when can it be?
    Baby Baby Baby Baby Baby lol
    Im gon say it again....I wont stop til i win
    :love:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is straight up tight
    very nice flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  3. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR DA FEEDBACK BLUEWATER...IT REALLY HELPS :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so cute:love:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so sweet...
    flow on
     
  6. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YALL FOR DA SUPPORT!! I LOOOOOVE MY PEOPLE :nuts:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep str8 flow word up !
    like dis here
     
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