Black Poetry : The SUTTLE APPROACH (STIRRING)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, May 6, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me Ms.
    Whats that your wearing
    Kinda reminds me of a summer breeze
    No, really!
    To be more exact you set my mind at ease!
    Given me a breathe of fresh air
    When Im so congested
    Wipe away the thought of being dead tired
    Set a comfortable feeling of being well rested!
    I no this may sound rather amazing
    But never have I been star struck
    Left gazing!
    This vibe Im left with is somewhat unreal
    The only women when in her presence
    All my wounds begin to heal!
    Every problem you take away
    All I look for is the next day
    You stroll pass in that same manner
    Dont be surprised if Im holding up a banner
    Stating: "OH MY GOD!!
    LOOK AT THIS MASTERPIECE!!"
    Only for everyone to take a glance
    So all there anquish can then be released
    Can I aske one more time,
    Whats that your wearing?
    Im sorry, Im sorry,
    I dont mean to be stirrring
    Like I told you before your charisma is overbearing
    Cause even when I try to block it out my mind
    Like a VCR tape that stops,
    But uncontrollably begins to rewind
    Playing that same lovely notion
    Of you in more ways then one
    Defining poetry in motion
    Perplexing ,but graceful
    Yet fluent like the ocean!
    Can I ask one more time whats that your wearing?
    Oh you dont have time..........[email protected]..............
    I guess I just continue stirrrring!

    By: Lj
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    LOL!
    This is so
    creative! WOW!
    LOVED IT!
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNKS, Much appreciated
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    creative ...I love the ref to the VCR tape ...another great drop THE...peace
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    creative indeed
    likes this...
    tight drop
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaking my head
    :wink:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed your refreshing words, made me smile.
     
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