Quiet Poetry Lounge : the sun shines bright

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Dec 18, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sun shines bright

    Ha…oh
    Ha..
    Ha…
    Yeah……

    I know
    Ice glow
    Like snow melt
    Problems pain
    Is dew in disgust
    Craving for
    Lust
    Must
    Battling night
    Can-i-bus

    In the second wind

    What I’m on now
    Grass grows
    Blades split apart
    Spark new growth
    I’m just a host
    Give toast
    Those who had
    Moonlight boast
    Moon shines time little
    Partial
    Carry this parcel

    Third degree

    Good news delivered
    Morning
    Moaning
    Mourning
    Transplant
    Like this monin
    Good breakfast
    Eggs grits
    Inflate
    When flat like p-cakes
    Today’s date
    Don’t matter
    Another rise is great

    Crunch time

    Captain
    Of ship
    Sun let you breath
    Shine on shady character
    Bring light to sitiuatio
    When vision is so-so
    Know though
    Give way to days
    When no dough
    Brighter day
    When dark times
    Hover
    My brother
    We love ya
    Hugger
    Millions souls
    Siddam’s
    Snipers’
    Jacksons’
    Give bright light
    Quite sprite
    Thirst
    Like
    No
    other
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so bright and beautiful wow !!!!
    dis was awesome work
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this is great ...you really but some curves in this nice flow
    wonder
    Peace
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i was hook
    nice flow indeed......
     
  5. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    saying hi

    I really liked your poem...i think? Naw just playing it was cool. Uof H huh? I might be there too. :sand:
     
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