Black Poetry : The Sun & Moon

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Sun & Moon

    The Sun, is as a Bridegroom wearing gold crowns or a ring
    Hooks up with Diamonds Ñ or moister of the sacred womb
    To be married with his bride
    After these Jewels embrace they go off on a Honeymoon,
    For the love and to create new life.

    The Sun is Andre and the Moon is Maxine
    They need no Chariots in heaven
    But just a boat to float on top of the heavenly waters
    Now we eat cakes and wines for eternity

    We are all dressed in clouds of white
    So that we remain high? Up in the the air
    Drinking all day but never drunk
    Because nothing pure can injure us

    As I row the boat please sing a hymn
    And play the harps of Amen please
    Its good to be rewarded for our works
    By doing good deeds to replace our sins

    By Andre Austin
     
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    what a beautiful wedding
    thank you for inviting us

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...

    its very interesting...it leaves qwestyons in the reader's mind...
    it's very very intriguing--

    nice mr. austin

    keep it up :nuts:

    sean.
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u very much for the compliments
     
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    Dre,

    This was so beautiful. I loved it.

    Mad Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    I added a line to this poem I couldn't resist. It goes like this:

    The honey is sweet
    Which is made from the melted sweat of the sun
    It runs down your crescent curves
    Partially eclipsing your butterfly moon
     
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