Black Poetry : The Substitute

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Sep 5, 2001.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering when I first met you
    Mind fantasizing, imagining
    Taking in the Nubian beauty you possess
    Why would he let you go neglected?
    Does he realize the jewel that he has?
    I begin to wonder…
    Does he know that he possesses the treasure others desire to have?
    I begin to wonder…
    When I picture you
    The eyes that pierces the soul
    And the smile that chases away fears
    I ask myself why should she be alone?
    When I begin kissing those tender lips
    I start to think what is wrong with him?
    When I find myself stroking your hair
    Gently kissing the back of your neck
    I can’t help but think
    Does he appreciate what he has been blessed with?
    When I feel her breasts in the palm of my hands?
    Allowing her to feel the passion she has for so long desired
    I begin to ponder
    Does he know what he is missing?
    As my tongue is exploring her body
    And she begins to perspire
    And our lovemaking takes us to a whole level higher
    I ask the question
    Why am I taking his place?
    As she grips the sheets
    And calls out to me
    As she explodes in fervent heat
    That has been so long forgotten
    I begin to wonder.….and smile to myself and then….
    I stopped wondering.
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Doubt

    ....why ask why ? tyght flow.

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    g-man
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooooo

    stop asking questions you already know the answers to :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BRUTHA EXTREME

    FLOW ON MR.KNIGHT OF NIGHT ...
    THE ANSWER U ALREADY KNOW
    IS WITHIN ......LOOK IN DA MIRROR.:D
     
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