Black Poetry : The Substitute

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering when I first met you
    Mind fantasizing, imagining
    Taking in the Nubian beauty you possess
    Why would he let you go neglected?
    Does he realize the jewel that he has?
    I begin to wonder…
    Does he know that he possesses the treasure others desire to have?
    I begin to wonder…
    When I picture you
    The eyes that pierces the soul
    And the smile that chases away fears
    I ask myself why should she be alone?
    When I begin kissing those tender lips
    I start to think what is wrong with him?
    When I find myself stroking your hair
    Gently kissing the back of your neck
    I can’t help but think
    Does he appreciate what he has been blessed with?
    When I feel her breasts in the palm of my hands?
    Allowing her to feel the passion she has for so long desired
    I begin to ponder
    Does he know what he is missing?
    As my tongue is exploring her body
    And she begins to perspire
    And our lovemaking takes us to a whole level higher
    I ask the question
    Why am I taking his place?
    As she grips the sheets
    And calls out to me
    As she explodes in fervent heat
    That has been so long forgotten
    I begin to wonder.….and smile to myself and then….
    I stopped wondering.
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop...

    when the pull of lust calls...sometimes you have to do whatcha gotta do. even being a substitute.

    FLOWING.
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks baller...One day maybe I won't have to be a substitute....but until then...
     
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    Bish...

    ...substitution is bad for you...

    you deserve the real thing...
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got any suggestions?;)
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why...

    ...of course...
     
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    Juicylv4u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop...sometimes them cravings will take you to places you really should'nt be...lol..but that's a deep piece luv.

    Juice
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    sounds like all of that had your name on it!

    :)
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!!!! Because he's not taking care of home is the reason. This be smooth like silk. If he come back I know she will not pay him any attention after meeting you Bishop. Hold strong to ya spot.



    One
     
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    BISHOP....

    You my dear are definitely 1st chair...
    not 2nd fiddle!!... but then again... some
    things are worth waiting for... :wink:

    this was tyght & i was hanging on your
    every word... with each & every breath
    i took... :)

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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