Black Poetry : The struggle to success

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EMPOWERED, Apr 26, 2003.

  1. EMPOWERED

    EMPOWERED New Member MEMBER

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    Once loneliness settles
    It suddenly becomes your companion

    The world is moving by so fast
    While I am left standing

    To win, to fail
    Mind of a survivor, heart of a champion

    Blessed with confidence and strength
    What a wicked tandom

    Its funny how i can be among the best
    But no one notices my glory

    Instead they look for something to be wrong
    To try and hang it over me

    If this is success, then I would rather fail
    Nobody blames the bottom

    They criticize the people on top
    And cause problems

    Why do they mess with the hard heads...
    And never mess with the people that are soft as cotton?blue arial large
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, while crap does in fact roll downhill
    I can attest to that sad pill...
    In the way that you flow,
    Whereas the commonfolk know;
    EMPOWERED is certainly TOP BILL-

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. Indys_Finest

    Indys_Finest Member MEMBER

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    Brilliant writing with a powerful message!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!!

    welcome to destee poetic playground
    welcome to da house of love
    welcome with open vibe that u scribe

    u should join us in open mic chat right here on destee
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    nice flow enjoyed da read
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I noticed your glory and it taste like candy to me. I'll take the bitter with the sweet
     
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