Black Poetry : THE STRETCH IN YOUR REACH...

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every time you reach out to me I accept you with open arms
    Do you think it’s the stretch in your reach or your tender execution
    Comforting but sometimes confusing
    but all the same its mentally soothing
    to my mind....

    Its interesting how some things gravitate to what they need in order to grow
    Like the plants in my home no matter where or how I move them
    They always seem to lean towards the direction of the sun
    Like they are saying “hey there sun, here I am please come share your rays”
    They make me bright and cheerful day after day

    Although it baffles my mind how I so unconscientiously find
    Comfort in the shine of your sunrays they help me get through
    The toughest of the toughest days when I feel like Im drowning
    And need to be saved you hear my cry and extend that reach
    That I except with open arms and I don’t know if it’s the stretch
    In your reach or your tender execution
    Comforting but sometimes confusing but all the same
    Its mentally soothing
    to my mind....

    I’m thankful to you for not letting me fall over and wilt
    I’m standing tall and beautiful with a little shine of my own
    Although I know I can’t survive on your shine alone
    It gives me strength to go on

    I hope you know what you have brought into my life
    And how the warmth of your sunshine gives me more
    Than twice the comfort I need to be alright
    Because every time you reach out to me
    I accept you with open arms
    And I don’t know if it’s the stretch in your reach
    or your tender execution comforting but sometimes confusing
    But all the same its mentally soothing
    To my mind…​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's plain to see that the reach and feeling he gets from his stretch...keeps him exercising his flexability.
    If the stimulation wasn't felt...from the stretch, to the reach...the arms would become idle. We know the door swings both ways...
    What he makes you feel...he feels double.
    Awesome flow poet, I love the way you strung this together.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    outstanding the stretching reach of feeling the comfort
    i love this joint here ...................flow on sis wow,
     
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    Not the reach itself, but the effort put forth in it... Your phrasing was so wonderful, eloquently penned.
     
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    That's so special!!!!
    I feel a "Awwww" coming on.
     
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    Queen & watz:
    You 2 always say the most sweetest things.
    Thank you my sistas for your continued luv.


    $$RICH$$:
    Yes, his reach is so comforting.
    Thank you for checkn' out my flo.


    Sweet baby_face:
    Thank you very much. He is so special:)

    Much Luv to you all.
     
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