Black Poetry : THE STRENGTH IN MY WINGS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Spirit2All, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pain, pain
    Again and again
    Acid Rain
    Permanent stain

    We should be apart …
    ...Just where do I start?
    Your game is not smart
    Caused a hole in my heart

    Now it's leakin my love
    And I've had enough ...
    ... BRUV.

    Playa, take back your pain
    And your acid-tongued rain
    And everything else that you knew was insane

    Take back your love - the price is too high
    What did you tell me …? ‘Girl, reach for the sky!’
    But then when I try
    You make my soul cry
    Well see this here soul? IT'S DESTINED TO FLYYYYY!

    Rebuilt my black wings and off I flew
    Could see from above the aerial view
    Now gaining speed through a different blue
    Clearing the air for a Brotha who's true
    CASE CLOSED. I got life to do
    So goodbye, brotha – forget u
    I’ll do me now - and you do you
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats how you tell whomever
    is stopping you from achieving
    to step off sucka...
    Diggn the flow to this
    Nice post poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    breaking it down is the key
    telling and releasing you
    to fly high and anew
    do what u do .......speak on !
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Spirit...

    :wave:

    We can sometimes waste precious time on people who halt our soar, all the while blocking the way for those who would be willing to happily enhance it.

    I enjoyed your expression!

    Welcome to the community:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And may your wings allow you to happen by someone who will support you in your journey, and lighten your load. I appreciate your words, do continue to feel at home here. :)
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the things we go through...

    ...to get to where we don't want to be. but, in everything, there is a lesson...and wisdom to gain.

    ~ sharing the pain ~
     
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