Black Poetry : the story

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Mar 4, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anxious.....
    her fingers had
    sun rays jumping from them
    her thoughts settled ontop of
    autumn leaves....

    colors surrounded her...
    she closed her i-lids
    and waited for the peace to come
    for wholeness to take over,

    against her darkened i-lids
    memories crept its way into
    her stomack,
    tighting her esophagus
    shutting her mouth
    against all...

    wept crystal tears
    that created their
    own membrane
    to learn to feel, again...

    her soul quaked
    her body ached for him
    his touch...
    his lips on her.....

    she wanted to feel him

    copywrite 2004, all right reserved
     
  2. jdj530

    jdj530 Active Member MEMBER

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    Ooooh girl u good...go ahead and keep making them good poems...cause u will make good money off of them when u get older
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEYYYYYYY JENNI WASSSSUPPPPP!!! OMG I HAVE HAVE NOT SEEN U IN LIKE FOREVER COME INTO CHAT!!! I WANNA TALK WIT CHU.....:grouphug:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    aweeee... yes this was mastered so warmly and tyte
    i was in a visional zone reading dis here.....flow on
    baby sis....
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :teach: U go girl.. Nove drop indeed. feeling u. :grouphug:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love my $$RICHNESS$$...:heart:
    -story
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for feelin me pyton...i gots love fo' ya....
    much love,
    -story
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Same here lil sis same here ;)
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl...I'm gone start calling you "Little Woman"...
    cuz you write like your...30+ with a multitude of experience...

    Girl...I'm feeling it deep..in my soul waters...

    Flow on sis...you know I love your "Abstract Passion"...
     
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