Black Poetry : The Story of Us

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Feb 18, 2004.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You blamed me for the reason that we could not be
    But the truth was
    That you never really loved me
    Did you even care
    I promised myself
    That I wouldn’t be hurt by you again
    But here I stand
    Just like before
    Hurting more than I could have ever imagined
    We couldn’t be together, not because of my reservations
    Or because our timing was off
    It was because you weren’t strong enough to stand on your own two feet
    You always thought you needed someone to hold you up
    Instead of just stand beside you
    You needed her to lean on, not me
    So I guess it’s true
    People don’t change
    Just look at you
    You said things would be different one day
    Some day soon
    That you would win me back
    That one-day we would be together
    Over and over I tried to believe you
    And again and again I was let down
    But now you’re forever tied to her
    And I’m supposed to smile and be happy for you
    You weren’t there when I needed you the most
    So we’re left with nothing
    Emotionally broken beyond repair
    There’s nowhere to go from here
    Except our separate ways
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well heard i feel u on this one
    sometime there is no other way
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hearing you sis
    feeling it all
    much love to you
    nice drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes two do need to go their own ways...One day someone new will add another chapter...liking this flow.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very nice piece sista. sounds like it is best that you two are going your seperate ways. i wish you the best
     
  6. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all, it sucks to have to actualy move on but sometimes I guess that's what's what's best to do.
     
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    awwww, Renee...
    this was so heart wrenching...
    moving on is so tough..
    your feet want to move but
    your heart refuses...
    Sister this was felt...
    well scribed...keep your head up
    one thing about the pain of love,
    it does "ease" over time...I pray
    God speed for you...

    Emotive flow!
     
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