Black Poetry : The story of Ausar partone

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  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the story im about to tell you
    is of the son of heru
    but the king of the gods of egypt
    youve seen his name in hieroglyphic pictures
    and egyptian scriptures
    he is the man who can control a star
    he is ausar
    and this story begins
    with his uncle seths sins
    of killing his father
    and letting noone know
    or letting the evidence show
    but ausar knew what happened
    and so did his cousin anubis
    who said uncle set is evil i thought you knew this//
     
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    i see another side of a poet's pen
    flow head on poet of the week !
     
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    Ausar realized
    that his uncle despised ausars existence
    he even tried to dismiss the existence of his own son anubis
    not realizing his enemies became many cause of the two godchildren
    they sat in Kush throwing and hurlin plans at one another
    to try and find a way to protect their kingdom and ausars mother
    Ausar accepted his fate
    and took the challenges weight
    the challenge was a fight with Set
    one on one
    Herus son wasnt afraid for his safety
    he had been ready to die lately
    but do gods really die?
    or do they become ghosts
    waiting for human hosts?
    Ausar didnt think about that
    He walked up to where set sat
    and swung first
    then was put on defense cause of sets hurling of a curse
    ausar blocked it then said: UNCLE SET DO YOUR WORST
    and set said oh i will as he came in for the kill
    with his scythe of strife
    but ausar punched it and it became the knife of strife
    this had set worried
    so back to his castle he hurried
    thinking he was safe
    until he saw his son anubis with a strafe
     
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    You're certainly giving that pen a work out poet of the week. I'm into this story, do flow on.
     
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    set was cornered
    suprised as heard of a search party that ausar ordered
    to find him
    he knew that the truth was out and that his chances of living were slim
    He said to anubis: son before you finish me let me say something
    youve set off a chain of events that will cause you to have nothing
    Anubis knew his father was lying
    he grabs his father as he flees
    and then tells his old man to GET ON YOUR KNEES
    and he does
    then he blows away set and all of egypt hears the buzz
     
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    with set gone
    Ausar and anubis let peace reign
    No more pain
    fast forward a couple thousand years
    to a young man unfounding his fears
    in a pyramid
    when he sees a sword thats glowing
    so beautiful it makes him open his lid
    he picks it up to realize its the star
    AUSAR will live on
    till the end
    hes a champion of justice my friend
     
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