Black Poetry : The Stealer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AACOOLDRE, Nov 14, 2005.

  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Stealer

    She’s gotta another man
    But I plan with plans
    She’s like a star, seen from afar
    Wanting to touch it but never can
    Some day I will be her man

    I stole her Polaroid picture
    Blew it into a life size figure
    Kissed her ruby lips
    Then rubbed her ebony hips

    My Crib her boyfriend’s rents a room
    My eyes keeps catching our zooms
    And she can sing for a hustler or a pimp
    But her man can’t face up to the rent

    I’m not a player or a gigolo
    But I had to sneak her inside my uncle’s bungalow
    Where we became acquainted and came to know
    Her man is dimmed as our secret loved glowed

    I’m fearless & her ex was too scary
    I took her hand and lips for a vow to marry
    She’s my only; the only one I seek
    Her cheekbones rises to a bedroom peak

    Would you say I was wrong
    My heart was light but remained strong
    Simply because my love was real
    Please forgive for what I was destine to steal
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    da--
    What her x rents a room
    haha-thats hott poet
    much love for real
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop bruh!
     
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    Hi AACOOLDRE
    wow
    this flow sounds like a man on a mission
    Your heart have indeed been touch
    Very nice drop

    Peace
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What is meant to be shall be. Keep those flows rolling, we'll keep reading.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maynn..
    You rescued a sistah from the big bad wolf.
    but i always heard what ..
    what goes around comes around,
    so..l dont kno what to make of that!
    Awesome drop!