Black Poetry : the stars

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jun 7, 2009.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Under the stars
    Back bent
    Flash back
    Snap, slap that
    Stars glowing
    Overwhelming attention
    As if I already met him
    Twice before
    Must have been another
    Lifetime
    Tender, soft lips
    Kiss and lick
    Each inch
    Legs split
    Back bent
    Horizon above tension
    Temperature rising
    Moment perfect
    Set for bliss
    Stress reliever
    Strapped healer
    Under the stars
    under the stars
    I felt you
    Experienced your being
    Feeling of you in me
    Here like twice before
    Gentle words of exposure
    Linked natural desires
    Soft lips
    Tainted kisses
    Led atray from
    Easy flowing
    Conversation, tolerance
    Understand, and patience
    Became knowing and being
    Conjoined
    Emotions of the moment
    Perfect set
    For bliss
    Under the stars
    Back bent
    Flash backs
    No limits, jus attempt, attack
    Under the stars
    Stress reliever
    Strapped healer
    Addictive pleaser
    We met moons
    Under the stars
    Light years
    All else is now easier
    Vision magically clearer
    Soft lips, wet kiss
    Lick, lick, dip, stick
    Under the stars
    Flash back
    Bent, attempt, attack,
    Set for bliss
    Moment perfect.
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Loved the format and the theme!

    Your presentation was awesome!


    SIZZLIN' HOT!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    daroc

    Now tell us how you really feel. :D

    Nice scribe, poet...nice scribe. :)

    :toast:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece brought to mind a reel of film that keep coming back to a sultry scene at a different angle. You never disappoint poetess.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    super poetic vibing sis
     
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    Beautiful, something about the constellations that lend sensual musing to a rendezvous.

    Very nicely done, Daroc


    epiphany:heart:
     
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