Black Poetry : The Solution

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  1. AnointedWarrior

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    The Solution


    Tell me y my people, y we kill ourselves?
    Y do we corrupt & pollute our souls wit much filth?
    Y do we record sex an’ put it on shelves?
    Music talkin’ ‘bout “Magic Sitx” & klits that don’t fail me now
    Is the Whiteman to blame / we do it to ourselves
    Killin’ our own wit guns an’ drugs, 1st class to Hell
    Self hatred got much heads locked up in cells
    An’ when a brotha comes up, all he thinks about is self
    Not tha ****** in tha hood strugglin’ for meals
    Jus as long as they get they cake in form of a record deal
    A deal made wit the Devil, wit they souls they cast lots
    They do wut they know ‘cus they don’t know Pops
    That ***** wasn’t their & none their to adopt
    But the gang did an’ tha streets is wut they taught
    Will this cycle neve end, I tremble at that thought
    The vision of tha whole race enslaved once again
    Yet this tyme, “Masta” is dope an’ ignorance, leads to prision
    I’m writin’ this because, I kno a Man named Solution
    He’s tha way, tha truth, he can put an end to tha pollution
    Corruption flees at the thought of this anointed One
    He’s apart of tha Holy Trinity his name is Son
    He died for our sins…….wut a sacrifice huh
    I cry ‘cus my people aint free, an’ it’s already done
    Come wit me I like to introduce u to Jesus.…son.
     
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    powerful scribe! showing us the way to truth. loved it!
     
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    welcome welcome welcome!!!!

    welcome to destee's quiet poetic flowz
    welcome to the family of love
    welcome fron me above :)
    dis scribe u vibe is tyteeeeeeeeeee!
    set forth the light so all ears & eyes can feel
    da depth of ya flow continue hit us up some mo !
    welcome

    come visit us live open mic right here on destee
    at www.************ we be flowin live with live
    music and friendly chats 24/7 love to hear u vibe
    cross da mic................welcome within u kin now !
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Welcome...kick your feet up...lady back...and relax. Welcome home.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    He lives, alive in your work!

    Praise God!
     
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    i was deeply moved by yourpiece.. So full of fustration felt for real.. spleshly lovin' the lines"self hatred got much heads locked up in cells, an when a brotha comes up, all he thinks about is self.."
     
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    I wanna thank u all 4 ur encouraging words. That piece was truly inspired by love even the anger an frustration was readily visible. I thank AbbaFather 4 anointin' me an' usin me to preach this gospel. Before I go....remember that wit out God u jus dead, but once he breathes on u an' that life wakes an' resitates ur dyin' spirit....ur purpsoe n life can b found
     
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    indeed ya right !
     
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