Black Poetry : the snoring is too **** loud

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Mar 12, 2003.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cerebellums are attacked
    the state of being awake is being
    jacked / and brothers are thinking
    off balance cause comas sound good
    /
    / THE SNORING IS TOO **** LOUD
    /
    sheep are tired from jumping fences cause
    brothers sleeping too long /leaving
    them defenseless and in jail sells singing
    the state of the union arrest blues songs
    /
    /THE SNORING IS TOO **** LOUD
    /
    noise assassinates the silence
    of a mothers mind who finds
    that her African warrior has been killed
    cause other warriors thought they were
    keeping it real / when real is only someone's
    reality and their reality is someone
    elses death/ let's boil away the
    turmoil and see what's left/
    an emptiness that defines a lost brothers
    blakness a void where tomorrow is on sale
    to the highest prison bidder/
    another blak male is behind bars
    another blak male is behind bars /How many stars
    is it gonna cost me to stop being blakmailed?
    /i'd rather smoke the sun and get high off the dark
    to not feel this pain no more

    (yo son shoot it right here in my left arm)

    /
    /THE SNORING IS TOO **** LOUD
    /
    wake up ******
    wake up
    wake up
    your disturbing my piece

    (c)2003 blakverb "quik thought"
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    blakverb

    ****...very nice flow :D

    :toast:
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the creative way u say ......... keep scribing blak
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why I love blak....why I love him....don't know him....but I love him.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to loud .....wake up !
    da call can be heard
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repostrepost
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: If this doesnt wake up some minds out there than lawd...i dont know what will
    Speak on it my brotha...this is not the time for laying around...not when there is work to be done!!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sleeping past the revolution!

    This was dynamic, riveting and definitely needed...
    *"Operator this is the Revolutionary Black Front,
    please send a wake up call to every black man
    and woman in America...RIGHT NOW!'
    We have five minutes til the revolution begins!
    No time to waste on sleeping my friend.
    No time for blunts and skinny no warrior runts...
    Kick it in high gear , cause the REVOLUTION IS
    HERE!

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE! :bomb: :bomb: :peace:
     
  9. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you wrote it perfectly.
    It is wakeup time.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Past time to wake up, we all overslept, this one was was posed to get everyone in check...flow on brotha.
     
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