Black Poetry : THE SNORING IS TOO DAMMNN LOUD

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    cerebellums are attacked
    the state of being awake is being
    jacked and brothers are thinking
    off balance cause HIP HOP comas sound good

    THE SNORING IS TOO DAMMN LOUD

    sheep are tired from jumping fences
    cause
    brothers sleeping too long leaving
    them defenseless and in jail Cells singing
    the state of the union arrest blues songs

    tHE SNORING IS TOO DAMMNN LOUD

    noise assassinates the silence
    of a mothers mind
    who finds
    that her African warrior
    has been killed
    cause other warriors thought they were
    keeping it real
    when real is only someone's
    reality
    ... their reality is someone
    elses death let's boil away the
    turmoil and see what's left

    an emptiness that defines a lost brothers
    blakness a void where tomorrow is on sale
    to the highest prison bidder

    another blaCk male is behind bars
    another blaCk male is behind barS
    I SAID..... another blaCk male is behind bars!!!!

    How many stars
    is it gonna cost US to stop being blakmailed?
    i'd rather smoke the sun and get high off the dark
    to not feel this pain no more

    (yo son shoot it right here in my left arm)
    CAUSE

    THE SNORING IS TOO DAMMNN LOUD

    wake up
    DAMMNN... NIGGGA
    wake up
    wake up
    your disturbing my piece


    HOOKUP :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: wake up!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop brutha
    beware we rarely like to use the N word ...
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truly a drop for the mind! that's the best kind of creative juice, the kind that flows from ones heart into anothers brain. Great piece! flow on!
     
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    yo bruh you need a MEGA PHONE :hearthis:
    this here was sum science / dapz
    ***** mentality alwayz got me stressin

    hh4eva
     
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    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is definately on point...so full of reality..."Keep Em Comin"...1 :welldone:
     
  6. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    thank u alll :hearthis: hookup
     
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    King...

    One thing...

    :bowdown:

    Continue to shake us...
    Eventually...someone will awaken
    but sometimes it's a slow process
    when the chains have become
    embedded in the core of one's
    very existence...


    Enamored,
    Sage​
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always, whenever I'm away for awhile, I miss some thought provoking pieces and this was definitely one of them. Hookup...you certainly hooked me. You have such a unique way with placing deep thought into the mind of the reader. Well said my brotha...strong and loud. :juggle:
     
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