Black Poetry : the sky rains rose petals*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sky soft touching--
    falling thru like--
    the ground doesn't exist--
    cool demeanour--
    loconic-like
    laid-back
    tran-quil-ized

    sky soft-ness rain
    down on my walking--
    drops of wet breeze--
    needed because days be hot-scorching--
    makes sean sip life and--
    remember to not guzzle--

    sky soft like you--
    i'd imagine--
    like the sky rains rose petals--
    caramel-colored epiphanies from heaven--
    bunches of small miracles--
    raining down on me--

    soft like--
    how you reign in my mind--
    collective thoughts that picture
    one masterpiece--
    closer to perfection than I
    raining down on my mind...

    (rainraindon'tgoaway)

    sean.
    :nuts:
     
  2. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    S.O.L

    *stuck on love*

    :nuts:
    sean
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice, dear poet. lovin' your wordplay, as usual.
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow

    Definitely liked the way this one rolled easily--words came very naturally and rhythmically--Amun-Ra
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooweeeee....

    this piece is dripping with beauty....and love, love, love, love, love!

    Talk about it , Poet!

    a
     
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    reminds me

    of walking in the rain as a child- even now as a grown man it always brings tears to my eye. Thanks.

    Love all.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    RAINING LOVE

    WALKING DOWN DA LANE OF PEDALS OF ROSES
    AS THIS WAS LACED WIT MUCH BEAUTY AND GENTLENESS
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTER, Ra, YeshuJah, A, and RICH...

    glad you all took the time to read this.

    *touchedinmorewaysthanwon*

    thank you all for i-blessin' my piece.

    bet*

    sean.
    :nuts:
    stay smilin'
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TP,

    this piece is tight. i think we were on the same page about rose petals....

    excellent scribe....
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a refreshing piece.
    full of emotion and love....
    keep it coming
    :eek:
     
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