Khasm13 : the sky is an eternal sea of darkness without the sun...

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  1. Khasm13

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    i adjust my eyes
    took a look at the missing sky
    where could it have gone
    oh my oh my
    not even the remnants
    of the skies decendants
    are left for me to gaze upon
    the wind brushes my cheek
    calm
    my pulsating heart longs for dawn
    word is bond
    the light that i search for
    has flicked from on
    to off
    i fly to the brightness
    like a moth
    everybody loves the sunshine
    cause without the sunshine your lost
    and things can get tragic like faust

    i tire of looking at this endless sea
    so i smoke a ble and jump in the sea
    to see where it will take me
    so much darkness in this geography
    my body spins in the changing currents
    so much so i thought of health insurance
    the force of sea gave me no assurance
    that i would ever break free
    withouth the light
    things in the dark can get dastardly
    swirling round and round in this gigantic dark pool
    where is the sun
    i miss his daily rule....

    ignorance is darkness
    there is no way to chart this
    as actuality
    it's a medaphor
    for your 3rd eye to see
    don't let ignorance
    take you under his wing
    where the lost souls sing
    cause much sadness and woe
    does this durdy demi-god bring
    merciless like ming
    is this savage soul scorcher
    common sense lost ta
    the foster
    and cause of
    the lowly no goodnik beast
    but its never to late
    to grant your own release...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heartfelt
    tight flow
    hear you loud and clear....
    speak on....
    i likes this drop
    Peace upon U
    Angel
     
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    When the sun sets

    And the mind closed
    Refuses new things
    Perspectives are twisted
    And the sea of darkness
    Envelopes the mind
    Don't let the fog take over
    That mist that hangs above
    Dark water
    Swim
    Swim for dear life
    And when you surface
    You will see
    All is right with the world
    Open up
    And listen without judgment
    For he that judges has not listened
    Fully
    To a heart.
    :heart:
    Hi, K... I had to do it. :)
    Wishing nuthin' but sunshine this year through...
    ~Cindy~
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Brother I feel you...
    whoever said ignorance was bliss...
    bliss can lead you to unforseen danger
    love the way you came with this
    keep teaching...we're listening
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, so many profound lines in this piece, Khasm. peace brotha, I am feelin you mightily
     
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    very well done bring forth da sunshine
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling this Khasm. Better to know than not, even though knowing sometimes can be blinding in and of itself. Strong images throughout.
     
  8. Khasm13

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    thanks fam...
    got this off of an old jazz cut...
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

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    an awesome write... very deep!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    U gotta have your night goggles 2 see thru the darkness of ignorance, otherwise you'll get caught up in the drama yourself.

    Very nice piece, bruh.

    Keep 'em comin' cuz I'm diggin' it severely.
     
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