Quiet Poetry Lounge : THE SKIN YOU'RE IN !!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Beautiful_by_me, Jun 1, 2004.

  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ©The Skin You’re In.





    Invasions of our privacy, by idiocies, got a grip on all perspectives
    And you really need to listen.
    I released this level of oxygen to speak to what’s within
    I share your sins in order to share your skin…
    Not for deceptive moments of excitement influenced by the stale air of unwanted winds.
    I need to protect the skin that we are in.
    And today I’m affected by the outcome of all your tomorrows,
    Your hidden truths, bright yesterdays, and unspoken sorrows.
    And I continue to Love the skin that I’m in…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully expressed and well done
    indeed the love of one self within
    is skin deep ....tyte write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Live it, love it, cherish it. This was a very crafty way of flowing with this.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU ALL FOR THE LOVE....TIA
     
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    OH...WOW

    I totally love the way you flowed with this...

    this was tyte...

    love this peace...
     
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    Whoa!!! This is amazing! Esp love "the stale air of unwanted winds." Gwan with yo bad self
     
  7. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:


    Thanks for the LOVE...




    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
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    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is a moving piece, I love the vibe.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: Hey, CarrieMonet...thanks for your vibe :luvv:

    This particular piece moves me, STILL!​
     
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