Black Poetry : The Sip That Defines Life

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  1. Sheryl D Martin

    Sheryl D Martin Active Member MEMBER

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    THE SIP THAT DEFINES LIFE

    From the well of life or over clouds above let us focus
    on the sip that defines our life
    Traveling unknown pathways, confronting daily challenges
    yet let us...consider the cost
    Whether it be friendships , kinships , or our devotion to God
    consider that which you sip from or the knowledge gained...there of

    Inclusive or...positively condusive ?

    My glass may appear empty , but if one observes closely
    in reality it's overflowing
    The sip that defines life pours love , peace , joy , understanding ,
    tolerance , spiritual unity , and one's ability to come to the TRUE KNOWLEDGE
    ...that will save your soul
    Babe...faith is the ticket
    Something that truly makes...a difference since some seriously be sipping
    ...tripping , nipping , and getting their a@* constantly whipped ! Sheryl D . Martin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe sistah was u trying to load a file of just a flow
    i will place this in the poetry forum....spoken files is in this forum
    love the piece love to hear this spoken on mic visit our poetry
    throwdown at www.destee.com/chat it be off da hook in there
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow....
    really enjoyed it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way this was posed.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sheryl D Martin,
    i really like the message and the poetic mannner in which you were blessed to impart it.

    Peace and Blessings
     
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