Black Poetry : The simple life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweet apple*pie, Dec 13, 2007.

  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im so gald i have someone like you,
    You came home this evening a took off yo shoes,
    Gave me a sweet kiss, I made dinner for you
    We ate us some fried fish, green beans & good juice

    Im so glad, I gots someone like you,
    To watch the television, like the 6 o'clock news
    Or watch re-runs of "Martin" and the rest of the crew
    To snuggle wit my baby, like only lovers can do

    It feels so good to have smeone like you,
    When Im in a different room in the house, I still miss you
    We are in our own "world" just me an you.
    Lovin' what "we got" like only lovers can do.

    I'm so glad I have someone like you,
    You came home this evening and took off your shoes,
    Gave me a sweet kiss, I made dinner for you
    We ate us some fried fish, geen beans, and good juice.


    The Red kind.:laugh:
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so fresh
    I was smiling the Whole way!!!!

    But Uhhhmmmmmm Listen.....
    I.....
    Am on a Diet!!!
    I can be having you talking bout fried
    Fish N red Juice!!!!!
    We all Know It is One Part Red N * parts Suger
    SMH
    You tryna make me Renigg smh
    See N I was Feelin this too!



    Beautiful Scribe Sis
    Flow Like Water
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tasty and yummy on da love and warmth of two
    y'all get closer ......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe had such warmth, just a comfortable, homey feel. Enjoyed.
     
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    Hi Sister sweet apple*pie
    This poem flow just ike your name
    I enjoyed the homested feel of your poem
    ANd the joy felt when you welcome him home
    Very nice read sis.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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