Black Poetry : The Shower

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by midnightsson, May 2, 2003.

  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    missing you as you wet your body down
    mad that as you're doing it, i'm nowhere around
    i'd grab you soon as you step out, still dripping and wet
    run my fingers along your slippery body, so the mood would be set
    every day that goes by, i need you in my life more
    beauty commonly runs skin deep, but yours is to the core
    we would enjoy spontaneous sex, on the couch, floor, bath or bed
    i stimulate myself by thinking about the thoughts in your head
    i wanna do freaky **** to you like DJ Quik
    but the connection i wanna make with you is more than ***** to ****
    i'd like to taste you, every inch of your body, a delicacy
    making love to you would give me a feeling better than taking extasy
    heaven is given a physical form when you lay next to me...
    i would be by your side forever, if it were left to me
    even in a room full of people i'd feel alone with only you
    i'm not a violent man, but i'd shoot up a whole room like al capone for you
    i'm attracted to you with a force thats almost frightening
    for you, i'd arm-wrestle thunder and fist fight lightning

    subliminally extending my imagination to new heights
    to dream of holding you in my arms
    even though loving you would feel so right,
    it sets off whistles and alarms
    your simple charm, blends flawlessly with your razor wit
    my heart feels something, but can't put my finger on it

    Derrick H.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out a heatwave rolling in !
    dis was awesome flowin'
     
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    One word, HHHHHHHHHot!
     
  4. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh oh my!! derrick can I be her...can I be the one u wanna do that to because I am feelin you...



    I'm just sayin...
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Loved your flow and your passion.

    Mannnn, you got it bad. :lol:...and ain't nothin' wrong with that.

    You read this before in voice chat. Come back and drop it on us again...and a few other pieces. We'd love to hear it. Just click this link Open Mic/Poetry and you'll be home.

    :toast:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like..dang..:blush: :hot: Gettin a lil hot in here
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...this is too hot!
     
  8. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wanna do freaky **** to you like DJ Quik
    but the connection i wanna make with you is more than ***** to ****
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: I like this so deep but so raw this is what I like hope to hear more soon
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    After reading this I'm beginning to think that your pen name "midnightsson" is a play on words for "midnight session", this was hot! Keep it going.
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...keep it up
     
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