Black Poetry : The Show Is Over (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Oct 4, 2001.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The show is over.
    The children are grown and gone.
    Wife files for divorce.












    Copyright © 2001 by Joyce Rogers
    From The “I Haiku You” Series
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JOYCE!

    Joyce, Joyce, Joyce, Joyce, JOYCE (wavin my hands in the air!)


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  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' it, joyce!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeee!!! Joyce

    gurl ya got me spinning round & round
    the wife done left too........
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Guuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl !!!!

    You got me want'n ta try this Haiku stuff !!!

    You're making it look toooooo easy !!!

    Luv'n It!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try It Sistah Gurl

    You just might like it. :)
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Alyce, Lister and Rich...

    When I initially begin posting Haiku, I wondered if it my love for it, would be shared. I am so glad that so many are enjoying my favorite style of writing. Rhyme, freestyle and acrostic, will always be my babies too, but Haiku is the most challenging. Moreover, it has enhanced my writing poetry...overall.
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OoooooooooH, that hurt. I dig this haiku queen. keep dropping 'em.

    blak
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce!!

    This is the baddest!:toast:

    Madd Respect :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's crazy how stories are told, dialogues are seen, and images emanate from just 3 lines.

    *bowing to your haiku prowess*

    nfinite
    jehiah
     
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