Black Poetry : The Sexy Liberated Opportunistic *****

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Sexy Liberated Opportunistic B**** (a true poetic story)

    We met in heat and sweat of a Shadow
    With pulsating Caribbean drums
    Hypnotically guiding us close to one another
    I asked her where she was from
    She said Harlem 145 by way of Panama
    She called herself a "sexy liberated opportunistic b****"
    She failed to believe that a man like me could handle her $hit
    Now normally I’m a cautious type
    Especially when dealing with a woman that would even think of calling herself a b****
    But her words challenged my ego, pride and manhood.

    So I stepped to her…
    Like a stickup kid to a tourist
    We danced, Slow sweaty, Wine and grind slow and fast
    She had me backed against a wall
    And I swear I felt a pimple on her tight ***
    But that didn’t dissuade me from getting my groove on
    We stopped just for some dro hennesy shots
    That’s when She asked “baby did you slip some sort of weapon in to this spot”
    Only ‘cause she felt something in my pants thick long and hot

    Now we danced from 1:20 to 4:15 in the morning
    And I was fit to go home
    But she preferred to not go home alone…
    So we hopped a cab up to 145 and St Nick
    I started to wonder and think
    What makes her a "sexy liberated opportunistic b****"
    Then my pants she unzipped the contents she licks
    My hands up her skirt slip….
    Cabby yells St Nick 145

    We were at the door to her apartment bout to get real live
    And she takes her scarf covers my eyes and we then go inside
    So I’m thinking a little kinkiness never hurt me before
    And Hey I’m with this "sexy liberated opportunistic b****"
    So I’m pinned to her bed and she rides me 45 min till we drift to sleep.
    And I’m awoken by a strange sound
    So I remove the blindfold to see that though she is still sleep
    She has lifted her leg right there in the bed she has peed
    Immediately I jumped up
    To find out what that her calling herself a "sexy liberated opportunistic b****"
    Was truly just an acronym for what she really is
    See as I pulled on my pants and shoes
    My eyes became opened to the conditions of her apartment her life
    To see who she really is
    Pizza boxes
    Empty Chinese cartons
    Chicken bones
    Filthy dishes
    and used sanitary napkins lie about
    Scattered here and there within her home
    Roaches and mice are her roommates because
    She is a confirmed S L O B
    Though she gave me great pleasure
    I no doubt was out having purposely lost her number…
    And have stayed closer to my cautious nature
    Else I just might find some other strange woman like her.

    Nahshon-Rae 12/31/2003
     
  2. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow, thats one intresting story.
    keep flowin
    thats some real talk
    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was deep my brutha but we B word is one of our
    banned words we try not displaying such in anyway
    and ask that u not try going round the words astric out
    thanks
    $R
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay Brother Nahshon !!! :wave:

    So good to see you back in the house !!!! Welcome Home !!!

    This is too funny !!!! It reminds me of the stories / poetry of old, that our Brother Amun-Ra used to share ... always such a great twist at the end ... Wonderful Work ... Thank you for sharing !!!

    Looking forward to enjoying your company in chat again soon.

    :birthday: Happy New Year !!! :birthday:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    this was nice flow indeed
    likes the story it tells....
    nice flow...Angel
     
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    this was indeed an adventure from the real :)...LOL:laugh: wow Be safe
    Happy New Year
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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