Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Separation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Roxanne, Oct 16, 2001.

  1. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pages of time
    Separated
    Peace of mind
    Separated
    I find my memories of you
    Separated
    All that I have
    Separated
    Holding on to
    Separated
    Sweet imageries
    Disapate
    Disappear
    Separated
    My tears will not be dry
    Separted
    I cry out
    Separted
    Never holding in
    Pretending this was not love
    Was it?
    Separated?
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I extend my welcome to you Poetess

    your flow is hella tight! And I sho'ly felt this "separation"... keep it coming, sista Queen! Keep it flowing!

    SWT
     
  3. alyce

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    was it love?

    I say yes.....

    intense...
    real

    thank you

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW !!

    I FEEL U SOLOLY IN AWEEEE!!:heart:
     
  5. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak about it

    speak about what an unspeakable place "separation" be.

    More, please

    J
     
  6. MrAdams

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    G-morning Roxanne,

    -poem- nice sweetie... keep writing...

    :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bringing this back i sure can feel ya here more so then ever.....separated.....wow
     
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