Quiet Poetry Lounge : The Sense Of You

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish to speak to you
    To whisper a melody in the wind
    To blow a kiss in the air
    In hope that you catch it

    I wish to see you
    To look into your brown eyes
    To catch the twinkle in your smile
    Creating a mental ….picture

    I wish to touch you
    To feel the strength of you
    To lean on your shoulder
    To lay safe in your arms
    Feeling ……protective.

    I wish to inhale the scent of you
    To breathe in the sensation of you
    As I close my eyes
    I can trace that you are there
    The scented blanket of you

    I wish to taste of you
    To be arouse
    by the tenderness
    Of a kiss
    As my tongue trace your lips
    I take pleasure
    And savor the flavor
    Sincerely
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dear Sincerely....

    I wish to speak to u
    and hear the rapture
    of ya essence and know
    u hear my heart speakin
    and asking foreverness

    I wish to lay eyes on u
    and savior the moment
    of ya glazin glasses look
    and know u see me near
    in spirit and sho u i am
    the respector of ya heart

    I wish to caress u every
    so gentle & tenderly
    and feel the beauty of ya
    soul as i wrap my arms
    around u into warmth
    and be the protector of
    ya body

    and I wish to taste the
    lustful lips and lose myself
    in u kissin and let my mental
    roam and be aroused from
    the motion of ya tongue
    so u know my love is u

    I wish to smell the aroma
    of ya sweet skin and the
    oils of u & the after bath as i inhale
    the secret of u to capture it
    deeply within and feel the cares
    of ya inner beings
    PS
    mystery
     
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    very nice flow....
    much love
    peace :angel1:
     
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    Bluewater, the visuals in this are so vivid, wow! And then Rich came in and added spice to it...very nice.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sister ola..smiling i am happy you like this :heart:

    ah sister angel i am glad you like this thank you:heart:

    wow..thank you watzinaname that is so nice and kind of you:heart:
     
  6. Bluewater

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    Brother Rich..alway bring a smile :)

    I founded a bottle on the lake
    Wrap at the top
    Was a lavender lace
    I reach down and pulled it out
    And seem there was a note inside

    Has he seen me from afar?
    And glazed into my heart
    As his words were so clear
    Like a whisper to my ear

    The breeze had blow
    The hair in my face
    I shook the hair away in haste
    As I read with a slow pace
    I sigh, as I became daze

    He proclaim his desire for me
    And I blushed so tenderly
    His words did wrap my heart
    Each verse burning a yearning thought

    He spoke of kissing my lips
    And touching me in places I only dreamt
    What was this note doing to me?
    Yes..I was feeding from the desire
    Of a note my mmm was on fire
    Oh the desire to know much more
    Whoosh…who…who

    The note was signed Mystery

    As I smile the note close to my face
    I tie my hair back with the lavender lace
    And blew a kiss into the air
    I hope it will find Mystery out there
     
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    My my sincerely
    from afar up in the sky
    the note drop to sea
    was a gift of me

    I've seen u many times
    and lone to hold u gracefully
    i've watch u sway from da
    shores of swan lake

    the sweet breeze blowin
    as suga honey dip caress
    my lips leaving a tingle
    of love embracing me

    I knew she would hear
    my heart speak and to
    answers that makes me
    weak , what did this blowin
    kiss do to me ....It felt so
    good i taste the morsal of her lips
    and the ginger of suga

    i look low and see a smile
    the kiss reached through
    many miles and collab wit
    my lips as i puckled up

    embracing of da mystery
     
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    I heard a knock at my door
    i went to see who was it
    It was a floral deliver man
    in his hand he hand some rose
    wrap in a beautiful ribbon
    he handed them to me
    he tilt his hat and gave a smile
    and walk back to his car
    i only stood there very amaze
    and then i seen the card

    Address to My Sincerely
    I sent a note to you
    Drop from the sea

    Each line that I read
    My heart slipped a beat
    My knees became weak
    Who is mystery

    The sweet caress of his every word
    Oh yes it enchanted me
    I Looked out my door
    Left and right
    Where is mystery

    His word oh so sensual
    I could feel his touch
    The express of his feeling
    Indeed touched my heart

    The kiss oh yes the kiss
    As he spoke so plain
    I touch my fingers
    To my lips
    oh yes I could taste him

    I held the roses to my face
    As I inhale them deeply
    So arouse I became
    Who is mystery

    I read on
    My head was daze
    I could feel him near me
    Oh oh oh as I moan
    How can this be happening

    Here I am in the doorway
    Caught in a day dream
    My eyes close
    Every so tight
    Thinking of
    PS Mystery
     
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    Beautiful smile
    warm embrace
    Mystery secret
    is da essence
    of ya face
    looking upon her
    from afar
    knowing my letter
    reached her heart
    and the flower of roses
    to say i do and care

    Sincerely
    i wanna know her name
    and the beauty she brang
    her voice echo through
    da air maze to my mental

    the purple lace ribbon
    the red roses
    the black tear stain the page
    of the letter i write
    to let her know of me
    and that i am real
    the mystery is the love
    one feel

    the days comes ahead
    when i release my secret
    and open up for her love
    is a keeper
    as she cuddle the roses
    i felt it was me
    i smile gingerly
    bat my eyes gave a wink
    she was standing there
    sweet & meek
    her unique ways
    captured me
    da depth she pose
    was untouched

    so i leave this
    message i tune
    to her ear that
    my love is aways near
    when the core is set
    and my name is called
    from the heavens above
    i shall come to answer
    and leave not a mystery
    but a heart of love
    a man from above
    a warm tender hand
    gentle arms to embrace
    and a face of hope

    enjoy the roses
    beloveth

    ps..
    Mystery
     
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    Touch me
    Feel me
    Mystery


    As I wear the lace in my hair
    To let you know that I do care
    In the locket
    Around my neck
    A petal of one rose
    Rest between my breasts
    I touch the locket and look for you
    Hoping that you see the clues
    So gentle are your words to me
    Will I ever know who is Mystery

    As I look to the heaven above
    And my eyes glaze at the stars
    A tear does roll and rest on my smile
    A warm safe feeling I feel inside
    As I caress the silver locket
    That holds the rose petal a treasure
    I make a wish on a fallen star
    P.S Mystery is in my heart
     
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