Black Poetry : The Secret Place...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a place
    ~A secret place
    Where hearts
    And
    Minds
    And
    Dreams
    Come to meet

    Where love grows
    And flourishes
    In midnight’s
    Quiet.

    I’ve visited this place
    ~The secret place
    Where strife was banished
    And stress resides
    No more

    As I looked on
    An island of calm
    Enveloped me
    Peace and tranquility
    Overwhelmed me

    I was entreated to the most
    Wonderful feeling
    When
    An abundance of ease
    Embraced me
    …Holding me close
    Within the warmth of its
    Bosom

    When I peered into the heart of
    This place
    ~The secret place
    I saw
    You

    {peering back at me}
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Baller - very sweet.
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS Reddy...i jumped into the mirror, for a moment. needed to see what i could see. AND IT WAS NICE.:)
     
  4. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You glanced and realized
    the enchantment in my eyes
    sparking and safe
    warming you in Love's embrace
    You looked at me and smiled
    Nurturing like a child
    I looked back and I proved
    this thing cannot be moved...

    1luv
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we came...
    we met...
    we loved...
    and two became one
    coz love wouldn't move.

    THANKS, Twofish...for embracing me.:)
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    always smooth

    brother keepin scribin

    your works with your

    mighty pen

    one

    pd :)
     
  7. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful Peaceful Piece!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    big baller!!!

    tyte bro - tyte!!!
     
  9. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i.b.


    thank for moving me. this was wonderful, chile!

    :)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww....

    good stuff
     
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