Black Short Stories : The secret I bear part three........

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  1. nevar

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    As I pulled up in the driveway I stalled for a little bit. Because before I didn't have to face him right away. Now he wants to come see about me after a month of being with Rico. I just need to sit out here for a moment and pratice my little act. I stalled for 45 minutes that Terrence walked up to the window and knock on it. Rolling down my window. (terrence) uh baby why are you just sitting in the driveway. (faye) no reason at all just was a little worn out and my body wouldn't move. (terrence) I got something that will make your body move. Oh my god here we go. (faye) I bet you do. You know how to bring the pain don't cha honey. He lead her out of the car and gripped her ample butt. She let out a soft moan and he kissed her passionately. Throwing his tongue deep within her mouth while still gripping her. And then he gently raised her leg to rest upon his butt. They began to move in motion that they forgot where they was. And heard their son Shawn say. (shawn) [email protected] go get a room why dont cha. They stop and both laughed. (shawn) I'll be back. (faye) where you going. This is a school night. Don't you need your rest football game tomorrow my star player. (faye) mom stop treating me like I'm a baby. I got hairs on my chest now woman. You better recognize. Dad you better tell her something. I got the skills pay all of ya'll bills. Doing his touchdown pose. I just laughed at him he always had been my little clown of the family. He always been a good son and when it came down to business he took care of it. I can't believe how selfish I am to want to destroy my family. (faye) well let me just say this don't write a check your *** cant cash son. Don't forget who taught you your dance. You know your mama got skillz too. How do you think I got your father. Kissing him. We saw Shawn shake his head at us driving off in his 2005 Navigator. My husband have always made sure our children experience nothing but the best. Our backgroound isn't exactly a pretty one. We was dirt poor but I saw nothing but hunger in his eyes. He told me that one day he will own his own music empire. And that he and our children will have nothing but the finest. And he kept his promise to me that was 15 years ago. How can I be so stupid. I have a loving husband two wonderful kids. A life that most women would like to have. I'm willing to lose the one thing that's right for me because I crave attention. I want my husband. I must figure out a way to end it with Rico. I know it will be hard because the minute I say I want to leave that's when he'll pull out daddylong. So what's it going to be my family or an impossible dream. (terrence) faye baby you want to go inside. Looking at him I nodded yes. And now I must figure out what to do now because my body can't handle him tonight.

    To be continued..........
     
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    lesson learned .......never play in a tri mix
    because it will leave a blazin fix and lies
    even betrayal and pain .......awaiting the rest of this tale thang
    whewwwwwwww faye no joke let see if she can hang stroke by stroke.

    very nice keeping me deep into it i see ......lovin it
     
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    thanx a million for reading me you know i love my windy city brotha
    cause ya not like the rest of the brotha. you know how to show some girl some love and play come around my way any day huh what that you say. i'm just playing thanks rich$$$$$$.
     
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    anytime my Ga peachie sunshine
    i love to play stay and sway i'll forever roam ya way

    beside the weekend is coming again ! you have a great hand
    at short stories too i love reading you .....most welcome sista Queen
     
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    WOW THE STORIE IS SO DEEP, I DONT KNOW WHAT I WOULD DO IF I WAS IN THE SISTUATION LIKE THAT..... I HOPE THAT FAYE MAKES THE RIGHT DECISION AND DOESNT SEE RICO ANYMORE ..... CANT WAIT TILL READ PART FOUR
     
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    to babimac13....

    thanks again for showing me some love. part four coming soon.:spin:
     
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    part six would follow pretty soon there is actually many parts but just decided to keep the reader amazed about faye!!!!!!
     
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    upping this back so they can be complete.
     
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    Uuhh...oh Kay Sister! You are trying to have me fainting all over again!!!!!
    This story has got the twist....she'd better get her act together!!
    (Running into Number four)
     
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    So many lies Faye has to tell, so many of them to keep straight. And Terrence, what else is going on in his mind? I want to know...
     
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