Black Poetry : The Second Book Of Truth (for all the poets)

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  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could take every line
    of all your poems
    and smush them together
    I know I'd have the
    answer to every question
    the antidote for every
    poisonous venum
    the cure for cancer
    the revelation of
    all the secrets of the
    universe....
    the truth about
    this New World Order
    the wisdom of
    the Ages

    If I could take every line
    from all these minds
    representing at least
    1000 years of
    knowledge,
    the collective
    experience
    in life, and love
    an awesome, living
    mosaic of history

    I'd read it right along
    with my BIBLE

    which completes and
    confirms everything
    y'all say to me


    much love to all the Poets of Destee's House

    SWT
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhh...Shadeelady

    Thou hast touch my heart with this beautiful poem. May the essence of poetic insight always be upon thee in greater measure. May understanding and wisdom be a path under your feet as you continue to read "His" words and apply them.

    Love Ya...Joyce
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ahhh

    this is real deep
    and strong
    just like i like

    i wanted to flow in verse
    in my response
    but i don't think i
    can do it WORTHY justice

    so bascially i LOVEDIDED IT

    and that HE
    that everybody talks about

    is part of you
    HE is not an outsider
    to know the true HE

    is to know
    the law of balance
    the law of 360 degrees (or the cycle)
    that's why 8 is the number of infinity
    it is balanced on both side if you were to 'cut' the number in half

    i didn't mean to run on but

    i just felt the talking about the love i have for the spirit


    DSS
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shadee

    This is EXTRA!! Your words are well presented & the sentiment is definitely felt behind each line!

    Thank you for this.

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully scripted...MzLadee

    hope you don't mind if i read
    the lines...years
    of knowledge and love
    and all we'll ever think of
    right here beside ya.:)

    peace&manyblessings.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh! dear Queen

    dis was as beautiful as it gets
    coz here on destee we be da
    love force of life 1000 years of
    wisdom & knowledge to open
    minds and grace it wit essence
    ya hit it right and tyght t da upmost
    and lovin ever line u scribe
    :heart: :kiss:
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ShadeeLadee,

    Your psuedonym does you no justice...

    It should be RighteousLadee for the words you so eloquently
    spoke here mos' def!!!

    Dug this vibe immensely Queen!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladee

    Wonderfully & Beautifully scribed. Thanks for the very enjoyable read. :heart:

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW!!!

    Lovely Artistry Dear!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't do anything but feel this!!! queen this was classic. It's that deep in here huh? whew!!! I think you're write.

    "10"

    blak
     
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