Black Poetry : The search begins

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im lookin for somethin the naked eye cant see.
    I dont even know what it looks like but i will know when i find it.
    so the search begins but in what directions
    cuz in the end is more of a feelin than a possession
    is more of what i wanna be than what they want me 2 be
    freedom 2 me more of thinkin im free
    than hearin the someone tell me im free
    why shd a dead body remind me im alive
    when i feel dead cuz it doesnt breathe,talk or feel
    the fact that i can b seen,heard or felt dont mean im real
    who im i what is the reason for my being
    im i just another human breathin
    living life waitin for death
    there got 2 be somethin more
    something we dont know yet
    somethin we chose to ignore
    something so visible
    but we can only see it if we want to
    dont be lazy spent a little time explore
    and i promise you in the end it will all b worth it
    cuz u will feel so whole you will think u didnt deserve it
    yes the evil in you is still workin
    cuz you do deserve it
    you will be happy when you find your true self
    happier than you are now cuz it will be better
    than the cards you were delt
    no more will you feel the way you felt
    thats how its suppose to be
    you get closer to you
    i get closer to me
    and when we get closer 2 eachother
    we will both know what we can offer
    and what we cannot
    so nobody gets disappointed cuz u know what i aint got
    you accept me as i am i accept you as u are
    cuz i can neva change you only you can change you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep signs...................wow
     
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    i can neva change you only you can change you.


    this line speaks loud...and a very important part of any relationship
     
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    Thank you for readin im glad u liked it.
     
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