Black Poetry : The Scent of a Woman

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    {OKAY...i caved in. SO...allow me to apologize before hand...to anyone that i might offend.:)}

    The Scent of a Woman

    The scent of a woman is
    Both alluring and enticing (intoxicating)
    It is the
    Aphrodisiac that attracts
    Man to woman
    Igniting scores of
    Fantasies
    Of
    Romantic intrigue

    The scent of a woman is
    Humbling
    Crumbling a man to his knees
    In his effort to please
    (Her)
    He doesn’t care if tomorrow comes
    Or, if night falls victim to the ends of time
    As long as he can (find) it within himself
    ~ To please her ~

    The scent of a woman is
    The root of the problem
    In monogamous households
    When surrounded by foes (ho’s)
    Giving off invita(ste)tion signals
    That conflict with right
    But implies pleasure

    It is a heady…Almost pungent smell
    That (dwells) somewhere beyond the sense of taste
    For men rave about the
    Deliciousness of it
    (The kitty cat)

    I sat at the back of the room
    Hoping she would pass by
    …Soon
    That I might get a whiff of her…

    ~ There it is ~

    It hung in the air like cigarette smoke
    In a crowded room

    {Is that what I think it is?}

    So long since I’d heard its whisper…I thought I was mistaken
    But it (awakened) the depths of me

    ~ That scent of woman permeated the room ~

    I followed the aroma around its four corners
    Wondering if I would discover soon
    The owner of this heady core

    I was weak

    Flushed

    Sore

    Without wind

    Fighting the captivity she held me in

    Yes…

    Its heady aroma filled the air
    Nostrils flared wide…How could she dare
    To intrude upon my senses with her womanly scent
    She was ripe (for the taking)
    But acted like she didn’t know of it
    She could have taken a shower
    …Washed away the smell of it

    Got me swooning from it

    Once I found my prey
    I ever-so-theft(i)ly
    Took surreptitious whiffs
    As I followed her about
    Bending down
    Turning around
    Playing the clown

    ~ I didn’t want to be found out ~

    ‘Tis a perverted old man that stands before thee
    Rained upon by the heated core of
    Punani

    ~ Accented by nature’s dew ~

    Her hair was drab. Her clothing didn’t stand out
    Her looks…well, obviously, that wasn’t what she was about
    But her body scored eleven
    On a scale of one to ten
    Man
    It was a sin
    The state she put me in

    And she’s walking ‘round with no panties on
    To muzzle the scent she rode in on

    ~ It was all over the place ~

    Attracting unwanted specimens
    To estrogen (most stifling)
    And we, men
    Seem not to understand

    ~ The scent of nature’s dew ~

    It tells the tale
    Of the woman’s tail
    Good…bad…indifferent
    Is how she hails

    ~ As punani swells ~

    Is she worthy of
    Inner-punani exploration
    Or, are detours suggested
    Due to congested relations

    ~ I mean…I don’t know ~

    Fishy smells like
    Sardines and shell things
    Are danger signs that screams

    ~ DO NOT ENTER ~

    Listen to its plea
    …Avoid the snares and pitfalls
    Of her
    Deep and cluttered sea
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and u said a mouth full ......indeed it lingers and captivated whewwwww!!!
    flow head on bruh !
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well ****!

    A real interesting piece of poetry here poet!
    We must flo all things the good, bad, and the FUNKY! lol!
    Nice flo! I Dig It!
     
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    Phewww ...!!

    Well here's what this one shows:

    As the ember is to glows
    like the north wind is to blows
    and if the petal is to rose
    so is estrogen
    to the black man's nose ...


    Some animalistic connotations
    Feeding my Id with sweet sensations ... Scribe on Brotha
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    POETS...

    THANKS for reading. and understand, FOR A MAN--and lesbians, alike--there are two smells etched into his mind at a very young age...the smell of money...and the smell of punani. for him, those are two distinct scents that will forever awaken something deep inside him. BUT KEEP IN MIND...not all things that look good to you, are good for you. THUS the question: Is she worthy of Inner-punani exploration?

    NOT ALL ARE.

    and the river flows.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    very visual poet

    yes avoid that cluttered sea
    but i can't be mad at cha for caving in

    women are the ish man

    ya heard me!
     
  7. Spirit2All

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    lol Well ... as a (black man loving) sista - I appreciated the poetry .. not really the smell .. but hey ...
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja...

    ...loud and clear. THEY ARE, indeed. and we--MEN--need to let them know how much they're appreciated.

    Spirit...i didn't mean to imply they you were otherwise...and, if i offended you in the slightest, please accept my heartfelt apologies.:) Coz i's got nothing but love for a sista. PLUS...it's always nice to know those preferences.:)

    THANKS
     
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    :read:
    Ummmmm....
    LOL
    Now brother baller you know a sistah got nothing but the utmost respect for you lol
    but I had to **** my head to the side @
    LOL
    No need to apologize though brother B :)
    Youre a well spoken cat and attraction it is what it is :read: or isnt lol
    I thought it was an entertaining read to say the least :read: :)
     
  10. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Baller ...

    lol no offense taken at all! I loved the scribe and appreciate your courage in schooling others on their olfactory glands :D

    I was referring to a post underneath yours, which implied that the only ppl who could appreciate such an aroma are either straight men or gay women ...
     
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