Black Poetry : The Scariest Monster of All

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That which you cannot face
    That which you don't wish to know
    personifies itself
    with a bag of tricks in tow
    I've been put together by
    those sadistic fickle fingers of fate
    so face yourself, for God's
    sake, before it is too late
    I have taken those skeletons
    in your closet and fused them
    locked all heinous memories
    deep into your brain stem
    I am a compilation of all you
    can't find the strength to utter
    because the humiliation of the past
    casts your present into the gutter
    I am that shadow that you have
    yet been unable to completely face
    I am that innocent, frail child,
    screaming for one authentic embrace
    I have been fashioned, not by an evil
    mad scientist, but by you
    And by your weak, trembling hand
    the devil will have his due
    So you can bolt up all your doors
    and hang a million garlic cloves, see
    It won't be worth a ****load of bricks
    if the true enemy resides internally

    Oh yea, while you're at it, make
    sure all your mirrors are covered too...
    Boo!!!!!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :help: :eek:hmy: :eek: :ghost: :ghost: :ghost:

    :danger: This had me choking myself. :danger:

    " And by your weak, trembling hand the devil will have his due "

    Afraid to look in the mirror. My eyes are shut, for night is near. Scariest Monster of all I fear.

    :danger: :danger: :danger: :danger: :danger: :danger: :danger:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hoping that Hodee doesn't commit an act of hari-kari...Put that sword away brotha...lol. Tis the season for scary flows. Thank you poet.
     
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    is the UNDERWORLD of DARKNESS !
    this scary tale made me move all mirrors
    and run vey well done as da fright night madness continues
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is the Underworld of Darkness after he has captured your soul, and taken over your body!!!!!! Be afraid, be very afraid....Thank you brotha poet.
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    those sadistic fickle fingers of fate
    so face yourself, for God's
    sake, before it is too late
    great drop poet...im a fan...hookup :flamet:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A fan? Well, hookup, that humbles me beyond what words can say, for I think you are an awesome talent. Thank you much poet.
     
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    Wiser words were never spoken, sister. Dang but this is the straight up truth, ruth! You're amazing.
     
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    define Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hose sadistic fickle fingers of fate

    Loving that line for the alliteration, really feelin this one. People are droppin a lot of morbid stuff, nice drop, peaces
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you much gempis, you tend to drop much truth in your scribes also poet. I was really feeling this one...Dealing with a personal demon of late that has been whippin my butt cause I just keep doing the same old thing, expecting different results. You know how that goes sis.
    Glad you particularly liked that line define. Yes, we have some talented writers here, glad that you are now one of them.
     
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