Black Poetry : The Safest Journey

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Sep 28, 2009.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard :

    i don't think i'll ever see her again

    cathy :

    be clever Howard, you know you two were meant to be friends

    howard :

    i don't know, i think she meant forever when she gave me back the keys to my Mercedes Benz

    cathy :

    really???!!!!

    whatever made her do that?

    [handing Cathy the letters]

    cathy :

    all of them say return to sender

    [shaking her head]

    i don't know Howard

    i still think she may return to the sender

    and tell you something tender

    howard :

    that would be sweet Cathy

    but i think after we surrendered that night

    we surrendered the right to be just friends

    cathy :

    you have a Mercedes Benz?

    Cathy, be serious



    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. Cade Foster

    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was abit confusing, it was ok but it lacked substance, unless I'm missing something. if that's the case then my bad, but please explain if you could.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again you had me pulled in ......
     
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